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what else could i do?
Contributed by
surge_joebot
on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 03:44:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Wet through from my rainy day wanderings.
Empty, lonely and broken.
Everything running through my head.
Alone in my room sprawled wet on the floor.
Slipknot blearing away my sobs and sighs.
Jim Beam warming my cold dead insides.
And I cried like someone who lost their virginity.
To someone that didn't plan to see them again.
And I cried because it was true...
And I cried because what else could I do?
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Re: what else could i do?
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by Red_October on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 10:28:51 AM AEST
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| So emotional in a slippery circle of words, I liked this a lot. Tiffany J. |
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Re: what else could i do?
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by Kitty06 on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 07:15:53 PM AEST
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| This poem pained me to read, it bleeds anguish. Such a wonderfully sad write. Keep posting! |
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