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Forgive Me
Contributed by
Nardo
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Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 01:40:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
ApologyPoetry
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I may never find the words that will
patch the hole in Trust
but I'll spend the rest of my life trying.
How could I have been so foolish?
To think I was ready to move on
when I could not leave the past
so instead You become the
"What was"
which was never to be
in the first place.
I just missed the endless nights
of card games and smoke,
cigarettes and drink
and the laughter that pulsated within the walls.
Even the lonely nights
knowing you cared
making sure I made it through
a door between us
never really letting you close enough
for I felt the need to run
that desperate call I answer
without fail.
Fail,
thats what I did to you
as a Friend and Brother.
But the past is past
and I can not deny what I have done
as each day I rise to the sun in my room
I am reminded of how I did you
wrong.
Copyright ©
Nardo
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2005-03-01 01:40:55]
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Re: Forgive Me
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 01:48:09 AM AEST
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to be frogiven we must forgive ourselfs but with a beautifull write like this who could not?
great writing.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Forgive Me
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by mina-1 on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 09:30:35 PM AEST
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A very nicely written piece of work.
I also totally agree with Emy on this one.
cheers |
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