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Sweet Love's Seasons
Contributed by
SLiM_eLviS
on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 01:18:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Sweet God taketh my talent, if It not be for thee
I cannot, shall not, speak love's word
If it not be for thee sweet love.
Tis' not the spring that blooms sweet scented flowers?
I ask thee, why be winter in such temperate seasons?
Tell me sweet love, tis' not the sky that holds the stars?
I ask thee, why does sweet love's face gaze downward?
Thine low temper hadst not welcome me into thine heart
Hadst it pushed thou heart away from me, and fallen.
Impatient, yet I wait, thou love is soon to mark it's mark,
and thou summers be warm again.
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Re: Sweet Love's Seasons
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 01:36:34 AM AEST
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I heah ya.
anotha good one.
smiles,
emy |
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Re: Sweet Love's Seasons
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by Naveen on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 02:25:55 AM AEST
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Nice one really moves like honey, Good work,
Try to add some zing adding more words and
vocabulary to it. But this one is great in its
simplicity.
Nice one
Looking for more such stuffs |
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Re: Sweet Love's Seasons
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by inoc on
Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 05:11:10 AM AEST
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A unique write...
Lovely read...
for a sweet love ...wait not too long...for her...
Summer wiil surely come.... |
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