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Welcome Death
Contributed by
Daniels_Princess
on
Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 06:45:40 PM in AEST
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Pitch black entrance
To my mind of insanity
Alive yet dead
Im lost already
One more breath
And its all over
Watch that step
Yes, my child
Have caution yet
Live in fear
Of what will and might've been
Another mistake
And you shall surely fall
Don't waste your breath
On that one last scream
No one will hear you
No one will save you
Close your eyes, my dear
And welcome death
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2005-02-28 18:45:40]
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Re: Welcome Death
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by purplestary on
Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 07:05:56 PM AEST
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| very depressing...but beautiful. loved it alot. |
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Re: Welcome Death
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 11:24:26 PM AEST
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| always seemed to me that death never needed to be welcomed, it was always the annoying person that would follow a person around. this was a great write by the way. one day i will learn to stop rambling. |
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Re: Welcome Death
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by Naveen on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 03:01:44 AM AEST
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Thats abounds state of melancholy and complete anguish well entrapped through
words
nice one, really touches |
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Re: Welcome Death
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by Daniels_Princess on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 04:52:56 PM AEST
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| Thank you all for your replies, and sometimes Death doesnt need to be welcomed, and its more so pushed away..but when life is just..going nowhere and people start to give up..they welcome Death..I wrote this in the form of Stan actually trying to talk someone into suicide..so..hope you all like it. However, no, this isnt what Im going through..althought it once was. Again, thank you for your much appreciated comments. |
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Re: Welcome Death
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by Spazzo on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 07:46:56 PM AEST
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Nice write. But really depressing. Kind of makes someone want to kill themselves. Well really I am speaking of myself but I would hope no one else thought that like I did.
Scott |
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Re: Welcome Death
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by CrippinBabi513 on
Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 03:11:26 PM AEST
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well expressed...good write....
* Babi |
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