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Fallen Angel

Contributed by wyrd_faerie on Saturday, 14th December 2002 @ 11:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



She sits and weeps
What has become of this angel
What do you see when you look in her eyes
Through her disguise
When you uncover her lies
And you realise that she is just like you

She shouts your name
But you are too far gone to hear her
You never realised the end was so near
Now it’s so clear
You never understood her fear
You were never here and now it’s too late

Chorus:
Cos this is the way it goes
Cos this is the way it shows
I will take her another way
I will show her it’s all ok

Repeat

She knew things
She understood more than you knew
Shaking in terror of another day
Living again
Knowing that things will never be the same
Feeling your pain and she couldn’t cope

Cos this is the way it goes
Cos this is the way it shows
I will take her another way
I will show her it’s all ok

repeat




Copyright © wyrd_faerie ... [ 2002-12-14 23:40:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Fallen Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Sunday, 15th December 2002 @ 10:04:57 AM AEST
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I think you should write more lyrics, i enjoyed reading this one alot...it's beautifully written, one i'd be interested in hearing....thanks for sharing this one ...

.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.


Re: Fallen Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by atwojay on Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 04:16:51 PM AEST
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It's not crap at all. I like it.


Re: Fallen Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by Feelin_Like_A_SadFellow on Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 04:28:26 PM AEST
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great , beautifully done keep writing songs please try to stop by my songs and comment thank you


Re: Fallen Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by cant-skate on Sunday, 23rd March 2003 @ 12:49:40 PM AEST
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it's very very very veryyyyyyy nice!


Re: Fallen Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 03:57:16 PM AEST
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Beautiful and sad like all your poems. So intelligent and thoughtful. i loved the 2nd to last stanza. great!

Love you,
Joel


Re: Fallen Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 09:26:32 PM AEST
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you are beautiful Lucie and you are an angel.
I wish you wouldn't cry or hurt yourself
because your so much better than that. I know
I've told you that before but its true. You
deserve the best never settle for anything less
because that would be tragic. Thanks for
being you and I hope you once again can
write your beautiful poetry. If this seems like a
goodbye it isn't... I'm not quite sure what it is.
Thanks for being an angel.

Joel




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