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Where from Here
Contributed by
Kay-Kay
on
Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 05:32:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I've been looking for a path to follow since i'm on my own.
Nothing has been helping me out and i feel so alone.
I have no clue what direction i should turn.
I see some teachers right in front of me but no lessons i should learn.
My head is leading me in one way and my feet going in the other.
Thinking in the past instead of right now where is my grandmother.
So many things said and done but noting taken care of.
So many places to go but one important place is up above.
Maybe that's where i should go since there's almost no where else.
It feels like that's my destination at the momment because i feel all by myself.
If i reach out a hand for some one to help me.
I'm so low that i don't think anyone will be able to see.
From here i don't know exactly where to go.
It seems like when ever anybody asks me anything my answer is i don't know.
I'm walking on the ceiling and the ground is flying by.
My head is going nuts in the clouds passing by the sky.
Where from here at the point that i'm at should i move along.
I have to ask you because when i answer myself it is always wrong.
Copyright ©
Kay-Kay
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2005-02-28 17:32:06]
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Re: Where from Here
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by loveisendless on
Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 11:07:36 PM AEST
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IF YOU ASK ME,YOU SHOULD GO WHERE YOUR SWEET HEART WILL TAKE YOU! YOU SEEM TO HAVE THE BEST OF HEARTS,SO FOLLOW YOUR DREAMS & REALIZE THAT IT'LL TAKE YOU SO FAR!! YOU SOUND REAL NICE,GIVE YOURSELF A CHANCE,AS THE ANSWERS MIGHT JUST LAY RIGHT IN YOUR HANDS!!! PRETTY POEM,ALOT OF HEART!!!!
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Re: Where from Here
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by Rikki on
Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 12:03:26 AM AEST
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Take a deep breath and look deep inside at what you relly want to do, then take the necessary steps to follow through. You are a fabulous writer.
Good luck,
Rikki |
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