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FOR YOU
Contributed by
rockstarr12747
on
Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 05:17:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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for you my love inside
is all that i could want
for you my love i set aside
untill you come for me
for you my love inside
as strong as it could be
for you i would do anything
i write a song and sing
for you my love could never end
for you my wounds would mend
for you all i do
for you can be my world
and everything surrounding
for you my stomach curls
for you i would do anything
for you are you
and thats what counts
for you i am your girl
and you my man
for you i do anything i can
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2005-02-28 17:17:55]
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Re: FOR YOU
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 03:29:08 PM AEST
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very well written poem, the theme of doing anything for this person is very clear.
my favourite lines were:
"for you i would do anything
for you are you
and thats what counts
for you i am your girl
and you my man
for you i do anything i can.
these lines really sum up the whole poem and they flow especially well.
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Re: FOR YOU
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by Nazmythian on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 07:29:21 PM AEST
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Well Crystal ... welcome to YPDC. That is a good start, a very nice first post. Every one has a different style and a different preferred method of writing here ... I hope you enjoy your stay and that you find yourself a welcome member of the family.
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