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God Walks With Me
Contributed by
stellar
on
Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 03:29:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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When the days have no end
When no face resembles a friend
When no one will let me be
God walks with me
When my heart is filled with doubt
When Heaven's tears have all dried out
When I am drowning in the seas
God walks with me
When temptation is all I can feel
When the flames reach up to lick my heels
When I'm overwhelmed by greed
God walks with me
And when hope finally floats my way
When happiness decides it's here to stay
When I'm surrounded by my every dream
God will walk with me
Because He takes my hand
And He sets me free
And no matter the road
God will always walk with me
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Re: God Walks With Me
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by Stitch on
Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 06:54:36 PM AEST
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What a wonderful reminder. I once wrote something called Longing to walk with You.
It's something I feel more strongly every day.
You describe it with finesse and beauty.
Stitch |
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Re: God Walks With Me
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by kkoala1957 on
Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 08:04:38 PM AEST
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Hi stellar...I like this it is a great write. Thanks for sharing your creativity.
kkoala (Alan) |
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Re: God Walks With Me
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by lostinmyself on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 01:33:46 PM AEST
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I love this. It's lovely. The use of he repeated line is great too, it isn't annoying, it is just right.
Great work, you describe how you feel brilliantly.
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: God Walks With Me
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 27th August 2005 @ 01:35:02 AM AEST
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*****When Heaven's tears have all dried out
When I am drowning in the seas
I love these lines. Especially the symbols.. tears and seas. Very nice metaphor.. analogy. They are alike, both salty.
*****Because He takes my hand
And He sets me free
And no matter the road
God will always walk with me
You speak truths. I love your write.. It is a wonderful and filled with His Passion.
Thank you for this most beautiful creation on a walk with God
Raquel Leah :D |
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