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Savage Beauty
Contributed by
neveryours
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Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 02:12:51 PM in AEST
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Tenacious woman who
Could not fear impossibility.
Embraced the futility of
Infinite and gazed in wistful
Desire upon the stars that night
Though I longed to wrap her
Seize her in this wanton embrace
Consume what lived inside her
Savage Beauty
(Though I longed…)
Her grace was a fluid thing,
Full of warmth, yet unreachable
My arms flew through her
Misty and improbable existence
Caught only wisps of possibility
Nothing more tangible than that.
These dreams (her body spoke to me
With the rawness of inevitability)
Are dust when you reach them
Lost to yesterday, and of no interest
To me.
Rage was how I loved. Howled to
The moon in this primitive despair,
Demanding to be understood
While she heard only the quiet cries
Of another vaporizing man.
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Re: Savage Beauty
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by sojourner on
Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 11:35:46 PM AEST
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good poem,I can relate to what you have written, my tormented mind still wonders.
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Re: Savage Beauty
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 05:42:19 AM AEST
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Enunciated with fervour:
"(Though I longed…)"
I can see this photo from many angles, although I thought you skimped in this descriptor
"(her body spoke to me
With the rawness of inevitability)"
Is there another way to say that?
Thanks for sharing it, though. It was . . . an interesting read, for sure. |
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Re: Savage Beauty
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by wolfman on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 03:37:37 PM AEST
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this was truly magnificent, the level of imegry here is astounding, but sadly it is laking in it actual description, still this is one the best poems I have ever read.
please do re-post this one with all of these commints in mind and wel see how it turns out. cant wait to read it again, be strong and God bless.
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Re: Savage Beauty
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by Red_October on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 09:56:11 AM AEST
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"These dreams (her body spoke to me
With the rawness of inevitability)" - Wow. Your poetry is fluidity embraced within and let go. Tiffany J.
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