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Ominous
Contributed by
sweetoccasion29
on
Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 01:16:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Hanging tight to this romance, dangling
from sin,
explicit dreams, comprimising positions,
laying open to suspicion
Holding fantasise, thoughts unspoken,
whispers of lust, breaths of life,
plans of deception tangle my soul
Gripping tight, your heart in my palm,
laced around wrapped tight, breeding
deciet, encircling reality drawn out of
dreams
Grasp this scenario, life without me,
exquisitly empty limited to dreams
deception, deceit, eraced and
forgotten,
life alone, dismal and unknown.
Copyright ©
sweetoccasion29
... [
2005-02-28 13:16:27]
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Re: Ominous
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by Greg_Skellington on
Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 01:46:29 PM AEST
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i liked it
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Re: Ominous
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by justjonesy on
Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 01:47:13 PM AEST
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| this is a really good poem....a great beakup poem |
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Re: Ominous
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by Sinned on
Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 09:34:52 PM AEST
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Fornication youth it grabs.
Fantacies of happiness and pleasure.
The guilt ruins the soul.
False love leaves with a bag.
Good poem
Sinned
I have to read others pomes now.
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