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Free Indeed
Contributed by
Red_October
on
Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 11:19:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Come down, crash with me
and watch my reality fall dust into ash...
Come too close that I might see
the light fading inside of me...
And you might see love waning away from me
as it reflects windows thru my eyes.
Let me feel you tightly and clasp hands tightly
and up in arms I lost my chance...
Come too close that I might see
the crash of reality come down on me.
Without that love I'll find the dark,
tighter now, I'll find your heart...
Let me hold you scarce like sun and rain on a rainy day
We'll see the lights searching like the night goes by
Free like wind...refuse to die...
Free, indeed, so I can cry.
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Red_October
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2005-02-28 11:19:08]
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Re: Free Indeed
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by Stitch on
Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 12:04:53 PM AEST
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Freedom can come at a terrible price, but sometimes that is what must be paid for healing to occur. Your writes always amaze me, and I can always relate. Nice stuff.
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Re: Free Indeed
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by Rhymingron on
Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 12:36:26 PM AEST
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| A good poem. Very insightful. |
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Re: Free Indeed
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by justjonesy on
Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 01:52:06 PM AEST
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i really liked this one, great job, I especially loved the last two lines they blew me away
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Re: Free Indeed
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by Rhymingron on
Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 12:57:17 PM AEST
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| Another very good poem. You certainly have command of word usage. I see that in all your poems that I have read. |
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