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Petals Of A Dead Rose
Contributed by
concrete_rose
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Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 10:42:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
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He loves me, he loves me not, a rose bud sealed with love and protection, eye contact, trust, and affection.
He loves me, he loves me not, kiss and tell, wishing well, holding hands, leads to more than friends.
He loves me, he loves me not, the rose blooms open one petal at a time, our relationship seems perfect, so simply divine.
He loves me, he loves me not, the rose quickly blossoms into a beautiful flower, filled with a softness of happiness, strong security and power.
He loves me, he loves me not, the beautiful color starts to fade, not enough sunlight, too much shade.
He loves me, he loves me not, our relationship slowly falls apart, we break each other''s promises, and break each other''s hearts.
He loves me, he loves me not, too much rain of tears, the rose begins to rott, off falls the last petal, i still love, but he now loves me not.
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Re: Petals Of A Dead Rose
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by Rhymingron on
Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 12:38:25 PM AEST
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| A very good poem. |
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Re: Petals Of A Dead Rose
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by FleurdeSang on
Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 04:31:43 PM AEST
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PERFECT!!!! I love it!!! Thank you SO much for sharing this with us! Beautiful piece. I think most of us could relate. Magnificent, melancholic, sorrowful. Absolutely breath-taking. Merci for this. All my love. Forever,
Your friend,
Stephy. |
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Re: Petals Of A Dead Rose
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by THUGGIN4REAL on
Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 05:16:13 PM AEST
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I LIKED YOUR POEM.
I KNOW I CAN RELATE.
AS SAD AS IT SOUNDS
I USE TO BE A PLAYER.
BUT WHAT GOES AROUND
COMES AROUND,RIGHT? |
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Re: Petals Of A Dead Rose
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 10:42:55 AM AEST
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I found this quite original, if simplistic in places.
"too much rain of tears, the rose begins to rott, off falls the last petal, i still love, but he now loves me not."
I'd write that as;
"Torrential tears, they rain, the damp begins to rot the petals of my love, and now he loves me not"
Its not exactly perfect, but I hope it helps.
Keep writing. |
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