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Peace
Contributed by
Wesley_Dale_Willis
on
Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 07:23:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Finding fortitude
upon this mountain serene
In amongst these clouds.
Copyright ©
Wesley_Dale_Willis
... [
2005-02-28 07:23:32]
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Re: Peace
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by Scarlett on
Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 09:35:03 AM AEST
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i really liked this, it lifted my spirits.
in last line i would have put "the" instead of "these" but that's just my personal preference.
simple but beautiful none the less. |
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Re: Peace
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by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 10:53:13 AM AEST
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| Beautiful Wesley. Much peace |
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Re: Peace
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 08:18:54 AM AEST
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wo sorry i havn't been over here before.
A masterpeice.
I can see how u won the haku contest etc.
gosh!
I'm amazed.
hhuugss, mucho smiles,
emy |
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