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Predictable
Contributed by
rottenrioter
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Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 12:54:19 AM in AEST
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You read me like an open book
I'm so predictable
Like a movie you've seen over and over again
You always guess what I'm going to do next
You're always right
I messed up again it's all my fault
You warned me
You saw it coming
Once again I didn't listen
I suffer the consequences
For the first time in regret
I locked my self in my room again
To think about what I've done
How many lives I messed up over this
Candles and Incense burning
Stereo playing
I can't get out of this one
I messed this one up good
I've lost all my best friends today
This time a fault of my own
You warned me about this happening
You're like a broken record
Atleast that's what it seems to me
I know now of what I've done
It's time to change that
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rottenrioter
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2005-02-28 00:54:19]
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Re: Predictable
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by emystar on
Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 01:27:02 AM AEST
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we all mess up.
Take it easy on yourself.
4 giving yourself is the hardest part.
good work.
huggs,
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Re: Predictable
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 08:31:03 AM AEST
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"Candles and Incense burning
Stereo playing
I can't get out of this one"
I got the strangest impression that you had burned your house down, with all of your friends in it. That can't be the case, as I think you'd write something a little more distraught . . . but it made me wonder.
Unpredictable and thought-provoking. |
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