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Cycle of Energy
Contributed by
LevyMetal
on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 09:57:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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From the broken muses
Slips typical abuses
Every highschool outcast feels it
But im am adult and havnt healed yet.
In ignorance of timeing
I keep it close to finding
Inside of that little blade is a blinking neon sign
"Help me out of this because i dont want to be alive."
Out of spiteful charector
I rake through distasteful manor
My weakness creates a messy extacy
A seperate incision for almost everything.
I plea for strength and knowledge
Though i found nothing is above us
Alone, you and i are still only human
I cut to feel what you feel, but look stupid.
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LevyMetal
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2005-02-27 21:57:03]
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Re: Cycle of Energy
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by emystar on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 11:12:44 PM AEST
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so very sad but great wrting.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Cycle of Energy
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by prozac_memory on
Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 09:01:09 AM AEST
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=( a sad but well written poem. keep up the good writing...
[x]. |
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Re: Cycle of Energy
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by EVERxSOxSWEET on
Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 10:17:59 PM AEST
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| thats a great poem. |
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Re: Cycle of Energy
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by sweetdemoness on
Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 06:28:17 PM AEST
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| Well the ryming is really good. I understand what you feel...but i don't cut myself anymore...when i feel an overflow of saddness i yearn for the blade. |
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Re: Cycle of Energy
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by spazz911 on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 03:09:19 PM AEST
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sad but i guess its real if its how u feel
kc |
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