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Nightmares Shrouded in Truth
Contributed by
essentially9
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Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 09:41:50 PM in AEST
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Nightmares Shrouded in Truth
Gleaming tears stream
Down the reflected image
That is fragmented with sin
All of her beloved dreams
Appear in a nightmare's visage
With every self destructive whim
Her dreams are my nightmares that I wake up in
And reality reflects the constant message
That nothing is as it seems
Because dreams never come true
But fears always do
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2005-02-27 21:41:50]
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Re: Nightmares Shrouded in Truth
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by purplestary on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 09:45:48 PM AEST
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amazing write!!!!! "because dreams never come true
but fears always do" what a way to end....so .....awsome...loved this poem...you have true talent. |
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Re: Nightmares Shrouded in Truth
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by stover on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 10:13:38 PM AEST
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I believe I have been there as well and at the time I saw them as one and the same...nightmares are truth.
Thanks for the reminder and unexpected change in my perspective. Good work, keep digging. |
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Re: Nightmares Shrouded in Truth
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by ForeverAlone on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 11:29:41 PM AEST
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Great write as usual Jen....Awesome ending too....But that is normal...is'nt it....Thanks for giving me something to comment on....=]
Clark |
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Re: Nightmares Shrouded in Truth
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by UnlovedChild on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 11:42:22 PM AEST
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| Love the ending! This poem is well written, great write. |
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Re: Nightmares Shrouded in Truth
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by xtremcalibur on
Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 01:50:40 PM AEST
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| I liked your poem for one reason. Passion. I felt it and therefore, your poem came alive. I could see through your eyes like it was meant to be written. Thank you for the poem. I am not a poet, but I do understand through the words written. |
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Re: Nightmares Shrouded in Truth
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by Rylo on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 10:59:04 PM AEST
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| Nice very nice indeed, yet I believe dreams can come true if we try hard enough. Don't give up on them. Awesome write. |
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