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How Do You Want Me?
Contributed by
pixie
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Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 10:51:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Would you like me to dress up for you?
Never leave your bed stick to it like glue?
Does being rough make you feel like a man?
Knowing that to me you will do all you can.
Would you like me to scream or be silent?
Would you like me to struggle & be violent?
Or would you like me to lie so very still,
Quiet as a mouse so you can get your fill.
Do you want me to laugh or to smile?
Would it turn you on more if I said you were vile?
If I struggled would that give you power,
Will you laugh inside if you see me cower?
I am your whore so tell me what you like,
I am yours & you will pay me for the night,
Tie me up if your heart so desires,
I will do anything to stoke up your fires.
Chain me up & scream obscenities at me,
Do whatever makes your black soul feel free,
I have no heart am I here for your games,
Nothing perverted to me will seem strange.
I am your toy but I come with a price,
Treat me so mean or maybe treat me so nice,
Hit me; abuse me that’s what I’m here for,
In am nothing to you all I am is a whore.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2005-02-27 10:51:01]
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Re: How Do You Want Me?
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by Willofree on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 11:05:35 AM AEST
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Provacative write, which sends a message as to what a unhealthy relationship could amount to. A saying that I like is....."Some men take hostages rather then partners...."
Super write
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Re: How Do You Want Me?
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by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 11:08:12 AM AEST
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| Good write Pix. Much peace to you. |
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Re: How Do You Want Me?
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by xXcrossedXx on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 11:41:55 AM AEST
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This was an amazing write! I loved it! Very visual and the message is very clear. Great write! Really great..
--amanda-- |
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Re: How Do You Want Me?
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by Rhymingron on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 12:14:05 PM AEST
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| Good poem, powerful message. If your speaking from experience I hope you chage it. |
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Re: How Do You Want Me?
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by reprobate on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 12:19:29 PM AEST
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how very schizophrenic. this could be very scary, you know, if it were a confession. really a superb telling.
thank you so much for sharing |
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Re: How Do You Want Me?
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by blowfish_jane on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 02:44:14 PM AEST
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You bad bad bad girl LOL.
This was realy provocative, well writen piece i enjoyed it a lot.
Jane @)--- |
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Re: How Do You Want Me?
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by Mangs on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 03:09:41 PM AEST
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| :-) naughty...naughty... |
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Re: How Do You Want Me?
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 05:03:13 PM AEST
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| brilliant poem pixie. |
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Re: How Do You Want Me?
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by Les4567 on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 07:41:32 PM AEST
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I hope at no point were you ever this person if you were my heart goes out to you. Your message was clear and very distinct. I like this poem alot. You are talented..... Keep up the good work
~Leslie |
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Re: How Do You Want Me?
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 08:38:11 AM AEST
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Very nice, dark . . . and evocative.
Keep writing, pixie. |
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Re: How Do You Want Me?
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 10:06:29 PM AEST
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wow pixie girl.
that was alittle intense .
Jaw drops to the floor.
lol great write like always. |
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