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MY BLACK GRAMMA SHE SAY
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emystar
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Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 03:58:02 AM in AEST
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Big Sis was peddling
tators or somethin.
She took me 2 an ole shack.
It was a way time back.
My black gramma she say,
2 my 16 year ole,
"If u do goods things
U got good things 2
look forward to
but if u do bad
U got bad 2 look to.
Them words of wisdom
stuck deep in my soul.
Unconscienly did vow
that, I'd do it somehow.
Anger took over when men
jus walked all over me.
Didn't know how to luv myself
As I laid morals on a shelf
Then one day a white knight,
he brought forgiveness,
came to free my broken soul.
Dear ones, don't cha know?
Long ago I called him Hiawatha
Foot note: Now I know her as an angel "cause she's long ago quit walking this Earth in a Physical being. Honestly after sittin in church for many years other than healings etc. that ole lady planted a seed with so few words that has kept me going thru the years. I'd also like to dedicate this to Marty Michelle, My oldest daughter). You'll make it thru girl. 4-eva luv, yomomma
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Re: MY BLACK GRAMMA SHE SAY
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by Necromant on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 05:21:38 AM AEST
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What an awesome poem/song lyrics. I really loved this stanza :
"Anger took over when men
jus walked all over me.
Didn't know how to luv myself
As I laid morals on a shelf"
Great write! :D
Anne :) |
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Re: MY BLACK GRAMMA SHE SAY
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by bernard on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 05:25:55 AM AEST
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| Your Black Gramma was a very wise woman do good it will be returned a thousand fold do bad then expect bad things to be done unto you. Great Poem Emy hugs from bernard. |
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Re: MY BLACK GRAMMA SHE SAY
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by blowfish_jane on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 05:51:21 AM AEST
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What a very wise poem/song Emy, this was so well writen and the beauty of it just shines.
Them words of wisdom
stuck deep in my soul.
Unconscienly did vow
that, I'd do it somehow.
I think those lines were just outstanding, very nicely done. Thanks for posting it.
Jane @)---- |
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Re: MY BLACK GRAMMA SHE SAY
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by xrockstheheart on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 10:37:17 AM AEST
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| i like your use of numbers, it is a technique that i use myself a couple of times. it's a good poem. |
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Re: MY BLACK GRAMMA SHE SAY
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by Willofree on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 11:14:00 AM AEST
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Your use of language, numbers and lyric style really give this poem a lot of charm. Also, it depicts a good message.
Great write
Willofree |
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Re: MY BLACK GRAMMA SHE SAY
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by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 11:27:05 AM AEST
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| Your Grandma knew what karma was for sure~~If u do good things, you got good things 2 look forward to, but if you do bad, u got bad to look to~~She sounds like a wonderful, wise woman. Loved the message and the music Emy, much peace to you. Laura |
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Re: MY BLACK GRAMMA SHE SAY
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by mina-1 on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 03:31:14 PM AEST
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so superbly written dear Emy.
A wonderful song so wise and so full of wisdom.
Loved the message at the end.
well done, Emy. |
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Re: MY BLACK GRAMMA SHE SAY
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by reprobate on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 04:51:18 PM AEST
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we could all use a grandma like that, though few realize it. em, i think you are becoming just like her...wise, kind and full of realization!
excellent sentiment at the end.
thanks for sharing
oh, i love the pic! almost as pretty as the poem/song!!! |
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Re: MY BLACK GRAMMA SHE SAY
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by xtremcalibur on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 08:48:22 PM AEST
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| Great people in the world say a few words with a powerful impact. And their legacy is passed on to the generations. Great write. I can appreciate the words. |
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Re: MY BLACK GRAMMA SHE SAY
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by Spazzo on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 02:11:11 PM AEST
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This is so beautiful and it's so full of wisdom. I love this!
Scott |
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Re: MY BLACK GRAMMA SHE SAY
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by assassinatorgirl on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 10:42:32 AM AEST
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| Original and interesting ^_^ |
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