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Prisoner
Contributed by
Chanti
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Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 01:49:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Tonight I will go to that place.
though I have always stayed away
I stored all of my pain
away.
Shelves upon shelves
endless rows
words whip at my ears
tears flood into my lungs
drowning me
tears that i was too weak to release.
Memories
clawing at my face
a thousand unsolved mysteries
screeching in pain
begging, pleading me to heal.
"Let me out
Let it out"
theyre on their knees
"forgive yourself
forgive me"
I am the vessel of my own purgatory
a living monument of self-defeat
and all that i hear are my own screams
begging to be justified
I am my own dungeon of torture.
Copyright ©
Chanti
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2005-02-27 01:49:52]
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Re: Prisoner
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by emystar on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 01:56:20 AM AEST
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Very good even tho sad. Full with truth.
huggs. smiles,
emy |
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Re: Prisoner
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 09:59:12 PM AEST
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good poem very vivid and filled with so much
pain. I enjoyed it and I hope that writing
enables you to get rid of what is tormenting
you. I really liked the ending by the way.
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Re: Prisoner
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by yangdantien on
Wednesday, 28th February 2007 @ 12:14:28 AM AEST
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I truly hope freedom has released you from the self made confines of the past. A brilliant confession well penned.
Peace
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