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hurt
Contributed by
karmen
on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 01:00:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Look at her,
this poor girl.
Sad doesn't even begin,
to define how she felt.
Really look at her,
deep in her eyes,
you see her heart,
you notice the crack.
Her lies have crushed her,
and her tears drowned her.
So young, so hurt.
Shes tried so hard,
and has never been understood.
She has said her sorry's,
and never really meant,
to hurt anyone.
Now step away from the body,
watch out for the blood,
cover her eyes,
and know, she really was sorry.
Copyright ©
karmen
... [
2005-02-27 01:00:28]
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Re: hurt
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by Kevin on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 01:52:41 AM AEST
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That was really good. Short, but to the point and very meaningful. Really really great job on this!
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Re: hurt
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by hellsfallenangel on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 02:05:26 PM AEST
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striaght to the point real good job
DEMON |
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Re: hurt
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by sprinter27 on
Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 09:43:47 PM AEST
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good write. i understand a lot. keep up the good poems.
~sprinter27 |
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