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9 months
Contributed by
BrownHon3yXXX
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Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 10:56:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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9 month's of love
9 month's of care
9 month's of protection
That'll always be there
9 month's making sure that your ok
visiting my doctor every other day
9 month's of looking extremly fat
But it's you inside so im ok with that
9 month's of me and your dad
Preparing your nursey room
9 month's of my having
To consantly use the restroom
9 month's of hoping that your ok in there
Hoping that you come out with brown eye's and curly hair
9 month's of having the honor of picking out your name
I like the name "Daniel" but your father likes the sound of "Zane"
9 month's of waiting
For that special day
When I can hold you close
and tell you your the one i love the most
When they place you in my arms
I'll know that your the one
When I into your eye's
and see me inside
I won't mind getting up
To tend to you everynight
As i stand over your crib
And whisper soft "GoodNight"
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BrownHon3yXXX
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Re: 9 months
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 12:07:04 AM AEST
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Aww ts is so beautiful...and I wish you all the best....
Last year....I spent 9 mths loving a baby...and he was still born.... still hurts so much... anyway..great write..
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Re: 9 months
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by emystar on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 05:04:52 AM AEST
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so touching-n-beautifull. Makes one remember their firstborn.
a masterpeice of beauty straite from heaven.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: 9 months
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by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 11:51:57 AM AEST
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| Simply beautiful. Best of luck on the birth of your baby(take the epidural LOL) Much peace to you. |
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Re: 9 months
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by sissy19 on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 02:49:27 PM AEST
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| This is an absolutey beautifull poem and wish you and your new family the best of luck! |
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Re: 9 months
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by freckle on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 06:47:17 PM AEST
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| Good subject matter. The flow is pretty good but seems forced in a few spots. Overall, good write, keep posting! |
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Re: 9 months
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 19th December 2011 @ 12:35:04 PM AEST
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| Aw that's beautiful, goodluck with your baby and congratulations to you and your family. Beautifully written |
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