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Of Angels and Death
Contributed by
mnk_1112
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Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 09:02:30 PM in AEST
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My soul is eternally wounded,
But I no longer fear Death,
Humanity is mortally shadowed,
I seek to finally rest.
The Angel of Death is watching,
Watching us corpse-like men,
And as we are turned into ashes,
His face bares an evil grin.
Does the World feel pity?
In the commotion they must not see
that we are beaten, battered, broken,
Our souls will never be freed.
As we watch the Sad Angels dying,
We cry, We lament, We moan,
And We think to ourselves, "Where is God?"
He is gone,He is dead, We're alone.
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Re: Of Angels and Death
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by mnk_1112 on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 09:09:42 PM AEST
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| ah ahah WOW never realized 'til now how random abcb rhyme scheme sounds... :-( meh. |
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Re: Of Angels and Death
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by CodyJ on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 09:21:16 PM AEST
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| stupid people ^. Good work and a nice change of pace. kudos |
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Re: Of Angels and Death
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by Daniels_Princess on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 09:32:51 PM AEST
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| Amazing write, my dear. I would have to give it an A+, but for now I will give it 5 stars..will look for more poems in the near future. Keep up the good work |
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Re: Of Angels and Death
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by Alina on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 09:45:40 PM AEST
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Took away my breath! Very heartfelt and wonderful!
ALINA |
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Re: Of Angels and Death
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by Tanna on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 06:27:06 PM AEST
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Extremely powerful, staggeringly emotional and very well written. Good job.
~T |
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Re: Of Angels and Death
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by sissy19 on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 10:16:03 PM AEST
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| This is a great poem it can be related to a lot of things good write it comes from the heart and shows meaning. |
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