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Asking for a miracle!
Contributed by
LOWMAN613
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Saturday, 14th December 2002 @ 06:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Holiday Poetry
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Dear Santa,
I need to ask for a miracle today,
My dads feeling a little down,
I asked God when I pray,
but hes still wearing that frown,
My moms in heaven this you know,
but my dads been lost since than,
he knows he has to let go,
but he lost his best friend,
If you could let him see her,
if only for a while,
he'll be happy this I'm sure,
I need to see him smile,
For Christmas is'nt the same anymore,
now that moms not here,
I want him happy like before,
Can you wipe away his tear,
For Santa I know your busy now,
spreading Christmas cheer,
but can you help him out some how,
So we can see him smile this year,
the pain in him is hurting so,
It's killing him inside,
I don't want to see him go,
but my hands are tied,
theres nothing we can do,
So can you help me please,
Let dad see mom for just a few,
to set his mind at ease!
Copyright ©
LOWMAN613
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2002-12-14 18:20:00]
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Re: Asking for a miracle!
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by Nessiecat on
Saturday, 14th December 2002 @ 07:28:12 PM AEST
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I probably shouldn't say this, but I have just been told to tell you or your Dad to watch for something strage that happens with a candle.
It'll be your Mum saying she's there. xxxxxxxxxxx |
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Re: Asking for a miracle!
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by spooky on
Saturday, 14th December 2002 @ 09:45:42 PM AEST
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noboby ever said that asking ever hurted
I'm one who believes that all thing are possible,,so do you i see it in your writes,,
great message,,craig |
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Re: Asking for a miracle!
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by DreamWeaver on
Sunday, 15th December 2002 @ 12:42:53 AM AEST
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| Lovely poem Christina ... I hope your miracle comes true this Christmas, for you and your Dad. |
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Re: Asking for a miracle!
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by OreO on
Sunday, 15th December 2002 @ 10:27:14 AM AEST
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This is a beautiful write Christina, i don't know why but i just know in my heart and feel deeply that your dad will have some type of deep peace on christmas this year, as well as you will.....thanks for sharing this one its beautiful girl..
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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Re: Asking for a miracle!
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by LOWMAN613 on
Sunday, 15th December 2002 @ 10:35:50 AM AEST
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| Thanks to all who posted! It made me cry just see you care! Thanks so much,I'll be looking for that candle!Christina |
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Re: Asking for a miracle!
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by yellow_sundragon on
Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 01:33:06 PM AEST
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This is soooo Sad!!!!!!! I cried. Actually, I"m still crying, and the people in my school are looking at me really funny right now, but this is sooo beautifully sad!!!
YS |
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