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The Truth
Contributed by
orange
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Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 06:34:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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You ***** me off
To no ******* end
This fire inside
You cannot mend.
The ***** I get
When I talk to you
"Why do you change,
The things that you do?"
I'll tell you why I changed
I did it for you
You wanted someone more mature
And thats the ******* truth.
You tell me to go
So I get out of your face
Then you give me *****
I'd rather be sprayed with ******* mace.
"I couldn't live without you"
I think you'd do just fine
You'd find another guy
In a matter of ******* time.
I'd even slit my wrists
Just to be done with you
Cuz I hate you *****
And thats the ******* truth.
Copyright ©
orange
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2005-02-26 18:34:00]
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Re: The Truth
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 07:53:02 PM AEST
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| wow! such feelings in that poem jumping out at you. |
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Re: The Truth
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by Alina on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 09:54:55 PM AEST
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Man! This poem could hit you where it hurts most! So much anger and aggresion but I'm glad that someone on this site has the balls to write something so true in their heart!!! Great job! Keep up the AWESOME writes! Whatever she did to you.....your heart will mend. It may not have been meant to be. You'll know when you'll find the right one. No questions or doubts or hate should cross your mind when it's true love.
ALINA |
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Re: The Truth
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by orange on
Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 01:38:26 AM AEST
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| Glad you guys like my work...could I get some more feedback plz and thank...peace out |
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