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Incubus Of An Angel
Contributed by
Daniels_Princess
on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 04:28:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Look upon this angel
Black wings, fraying
Cornered in her glass casket
For clemency she is praying
Ragged vestures covering portions
Leaving men to lust
Tears immersing her completely
Persuasions of rape discussed
Infatuation with her physique
Influences life and death
She awaits her penalty as
Apprehension slows her breath
Fallen angel, arouse at once
Retain this incubus in mind
Dread not for today
But heed this admonition for rising times
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Re: Incubus Of An Angel
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by Stalkee on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 04:41:30 PM AEST
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| strange indeed, it was good though, nicely done |
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Re: Incubus Of An Angel
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by Daniels_Princess on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 04:44:09 PM AEST
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| Stalkee, thank you for your comment. :) |
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Re: Incubus Of An Angel
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by SimplyMe on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 05:02:05 PM AEST
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I loved this poem. It was very beautiful. Great write.
~Alucia~ |
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Re: Incubus Of An Angel
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by Daniels_Princess on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 05:04:33 PM AEST
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| SimplyMe, thank you for your kind words and your reply, it is greatly appreciated! |
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Re: Incubus Of An Angel
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by Mystic_Beauty_nz on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 05:24:58 PM AEST
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| Did you know this Angel?? Does she read your words??? I hope so... Well written.. Thanx for sharing |
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Re: Incubus Of An Angel
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by Daniels_Princess on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 05:33:52 PM AEST
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| Mystic_Beauty_nz, it was from an image Ive kept long awaiting in my mind..a small girl, frightened, black charred wings lying in a glass casket..finally I molded it into something. Thank you for your comment! |
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Re: Incubus Of An Angel
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by Necromant on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 07:25:25 PM AEST
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| Oh, dark poem indeed. I really liked it! |
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Re: Incubus Of An Angel
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by Daniels_Princess on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 07:39:57 PM AEST
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| Necromant, thank you for your words. It is much appreciated. Ive held this idea in my mind for quite a while now, and havent been able to mold it into anything until now..Glad you liked it. |
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Re: Incubus Of An Angel
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by BrokenAngel on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 08:05:37 PM AEST
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| This is a wonderful poem. Good job writing it. |
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Re: Incubus Of An Angel
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by mnk_1112 on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 08:42:54 PM AEST
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| This is an awe-inspiring poem. Tremendously beautiful, but sad as well- you've accomplished a pyrrhic in that you make your audience flow with the poem but at the price of their happiness. Excellent job. |
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Re: Incubus Of An Angel
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by Daniels_Princess on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 09:12:51 PM AEST
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| BrokenAngel and mnk_1112, thank you both for your replies and comments. They are much appreciated, and mnk_1112, Im glad I acomplsihed what I was working towards. Again, thank you both. |
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Re: Incubus Of An Angel
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by pixie on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 08:06:46 AM AEST
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wow that was amazing, keep uop the good work
pix xx |
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Re: Incubus Of An Angel
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by Spazzo on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 09:50:12 PM AEST
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Very awesome, and really dark. Great job.
Scott |
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Re: Incubus Of An Angel
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by Daniels_Princess on
Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 05:30:53 PM AEST
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| Scott and pixie, thank you both for your replies. Their much appreciated. |
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