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Naked

Contributed by sissy19 on Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 01:51:11 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



On that sad night you took my dignity and pride.
I'm trying to move past this one day at a time, so my tears can be dried.
The shock and the feelings were the worst part.
On that sad night you took a big piece of my heart.
Yes, I'll be able to smile and laugh again but will I ever be able to trust another?
You took my ability to feel for any other.
Hopefully in time that will change because I need somebody to love me and need me.
But because of you I have to let those feelings be.
My ability to feel comfortable was stripped bare.
In my lonely sole it feels as if I'll never care.
On that sad night you took my self confidence.
I just wish now that I can think clear I had more sense.
I was needy for attetion and you took advantage of it.
Now alls I want to do is cry and sit.
But I've thought it over and over again and again and i'm not gonna let you win with me.
I won't let you destroy my life can't you see?
I'll get past this in time.
Because I'm not gonna sit like a mime.




Copyright © sissy19 ... [ 2005-02-26 13:51:11]
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Re: Naked (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 01:57:08 PM AEST
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I am sorry that you had to go through this, nobody should have to endure something as horrible as this. no wonder this was hard for you to write, I hope it helped even just a little to get this out. very sad write *hugs*
pix xx


Re: Naked (User Rating: 1 )
by Hannah_Heaven on Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 02:29:11 PM AEST
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im sorry you had to go through this,you have alot of heart to write this to show other people no one should be treated like that.and i hope you can get over it day by day,and get on with your life,
lots of love han xxx


Re: Naked (User Rating: 1 )
by Sunnyside on Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 04:43:58 PM AEST
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Dear sissy19

What a valient effort to divest yourself of
horrors past.
As a man, with empathy and life pain
I salute you in your determination.
That anyone should force themselves upon another is evil personified.

Not all men are so inclined and your true knight will somehow find you, and with deep love set you free.

Thus I pray for thee.




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