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Limbo
Contributed by
reprobate
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Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 12:29:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Just sitting here in the shadows
Watching the day fade in final fury
Nothing to do, nothing to think
How sad and pitiful I've become
Hiding here in the darkness
Drawing safety from the onrushing empty
Sensing only silence in the growing quiet
Finding a deviant relief in the dark
Drowning alone in my remembrances
I sit, and, I wait, once again
Knowing this solitude is fleeting
Hoping now is the end of my disease
Living, if you call it that, is such an infected lie
Pustules of memory ooze through light
The night becomes the needed ointment
A salve against the sickness of before
Watching the sun die, here, in this tomb
My very being rails against its return
I desire nothing but an end, a release
Stop this misery, cure my hell, let me go
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reprobate
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2005-02-26 12:29:33]
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Re: Limbo
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by pixie on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 12:39:34 PM AEST
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very well put together dark write, flowed well
pix xx |
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Re: Limbo
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 01:46:23 PM AEST
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| this read perfectly. maybe it is you that needs to do the letting go? |
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Re: Limbo
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by MorningDove on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 11:02:45 PM AEST
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| I hate dark feelings. Free will seems so wasted to me when one chooses eternal darkness or death. It is so cold and empty there. Life has warmth and love and rainbows and chocolate. It may not be the love we are hoping for, but it is better than none. I would rather surf a rainbow one color at a time than dwell in my dark cold inner being. Dove |
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Re: Limbo
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by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 10th September 2007 @ 09:03:49 AM AEST
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Whoa...this hits way too close. I know these feelings all too well. Chillingly sad.
Peace and hugs,
Laura |
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