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NIFOC
Contributed by
Flipped_out
on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 10:15:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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Every day
Sitting awake near the cool glow
Of monitors humming
NIFOC
My fingers touching over keystrokes
like lovers clawing at clothes
only to be close.
NIFOC
Even though it’s raining
And we are miles apart the words we make are
turned to flesh
NIFOC
Drives and disks playing in my
Mess of emotional home
NIFOC
Upon a bed of scattered poets pages
You made love to me,
Copy paste your heart
Copyright ©
Flipped_out
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2005-02-26 10:15:30]
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Re: NIFOC
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by pixie on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 10:21:22 AM AEST
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very good write, nice to see you posting again Kell :)
pix xx |
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Re: NIFOC
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 12:15:21 PM AEST
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i looooooooooooooooooooooooooove you so much, copy paste your heart now that is class. xxx
Johnny. |
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Re: NIFOC
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by blowfish_jane on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 01:32:32 AM AEST
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Aww that was sweet, i liked it a lot.
Great write Kelly
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Re: NIFOC
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 05:09:26 AM AEST
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lol sweet .
I am sure wildjohnny like this one.
great job. |
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Re: NIFOC
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by Spazzo on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 09:36:47 PM AEST
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Aww this is soo sweet!
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Re: NIFOC
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by Silent-No-More on
Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 10:22:28 AM AEST
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Kelly! This is fabulous! Though... "sweet"... hmmmm... I didn't get 'sweet' when I read it. I mean that in a very good way.... it's... it's just MORE than that, heavier than that. Decribing this as sweet would seem to be missing everything except what's on the very surface of this... there is, I think, much more than that.
Call me clueless - but I have no idea what NIFOC is. Somehow though.... it didn't seem to matter that I didn't know.
Well done!
~SNM~ |
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