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Passing Note
Contributed by
okokjazz
on
Saturday, 14th December 2002 @ 05:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Brittle, glassy cold.
Sound of leaves in the night;
A tiny cracking sound of freezing.
A moment,
An echo on the wind is all it took -
And suddenly
Everything is alright again.
Before hasn’t happened;
After doesn’t matter.
For a moment -
For now
Copyright ©
okokjazz
... [
2002-12-14 17:00:00]
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Re: Passing Note
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by lilch4ever on
Saturday, 14th December 2002 @ 11:13:13 PM AEST
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| I like this one is different, sorta unique:) |
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Re: Passing Note
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by Ronald on
Sunday, 15th December 2002 @ 06:44:59 AM AEST
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| COOL my pal! Short and sweet :-) |
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Re: Passing Note
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by OreO on
Sunday, 15th December 2002 @ 11:30:17 AM AEST
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An echo on the wind.....i love how this poem started...it's beautifully written in such few words...thanks for sharing this one i enjoyed reading it...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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Re: Passing Note
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by Cynthia on
Tuesday, 31st December 2002 @ 07:48:25 AM AEST
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| It reminds me of winter setting in. Great write. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: Passing Note
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by wolfflow on
Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 02:48:01 PM AEST
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| Hmmmm |
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Re: Passing Note
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 03:02:34 PM AEST
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| like a fleeting thought.. your poem almost forms a heart.. this is special.. |
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