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Black Tears
Contributed by
Devsouane
on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 05:29:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Tears are falling from your eyes
falling down your face
at the middle of the night
I know they always do the same
but please hold them all away
'cause i'm dying to see your eyes
I know what you're having from this world
I know how you're facing this world
I know what you are dying for
you always keep crying but it makes no sense
you should know there's no felling with any human
they all gone away along time ago
now I know that I cant wake up all the people inside
they're no souls inside
god had taken them all away 'cause they're not owner to have
I can see all the devils telling everybody how to live their lives
but u should know it shouldn't makes u cry
I know what you're having from this world
I know how you're facing this world
I know what you are dying for
you always keep crying but it makes no sense
you should know there's no felling with any human
they all gone away along time ago
I know what you're showing from your eyes
I know how you're responding with this world
I know what you're breathing for
you're the one who cries when you're alone
you should know tears never works with this world
no feelings no souls from along time ago
I'm the dark of your night
I'm the light of your shining stars
I'm the black clouds of your night sky
I'm the moonlight of your night sky
I'm the sound of your night tears
I'm just to wish you goodnights without your black tears..
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Devsouane
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2005-02-26 05:29:08]
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Re: Black Tears
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 02:00:28 PM AEST
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| less redundancy of the same words would really make this poem better. |
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Re: Black Tears
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 22nd October 2006 @ 03:55:27 PM AEST
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I absolutely Loved the imagery in this poem. I think this would be one of the better peoms that i have read!
Excellent job! |
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