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Homesick And In Need Of Love

Contributed by unlovedchild on Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 04:46:28 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

How could you leave us here for six days when you know how much we hate it
Then go so far away that we couldn't get to you if we tried
I don't understand why you would do this to me
It hurts so bad knowing you did this purposely
Tears have already been cried
The yelling gets worse every day and night
I don't know how much more I can take
Two more days seems like such a long wait
I feel like crying but someone might hear
Why did you leave me here
I want so badly to go home
I would rather be anywhere but here
Homesick is what I am
I want anything but this
I would rather be yelled at by you
Then hearing the yelling she puts him through
She is mean to us all
Why can't you see
I wish that you would comfort me
That is something you wouldn't do
I will just pretend and go away to my own place in my mind
My imagination will take me anywhere
I can be anything
But I can't feel the one thing I want most
Love

Copyright © unlovedchild ... [ 2005-02-26 04:46:28]
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Re: Homesick And In Need Of Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 02:11:44 PM AEST
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i think this would be better a little bit more vague.

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