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I can see her dying
Contributed by
blacksabbath026
on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 01:08:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Everyday i see her
Cutting herself
To ease the pain
Everytime we talk
She is sad
Alone
I want to comfort her
To tell her everything will be okay
I want her to see
That her life means something
And not to throw it away
This girl
She tells me everyday
How she likes me
I know it is true
I can see it in her eyes
I can see her hell in them
And the little sparkle of hope
That only i can give
It seems she is desperately holding on
Struggling every second
Not to spill her own blood
It kills me inside
I know she cant fight forever
That if i dont do something
She will kill herself
I can see all the fresh wounds
Self inflicted
I can see her crying
Every second of the day
Wishing for a emotion
She hasn't felt in a long time
I want to comfort her
But i dont
After all
What am i too do?
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Re: I can see her dying
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by xXcrossedXx on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 01:21:18 AM AEST
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I don't know how you feel because I am in the girls position. Just love her. She needs someone to be there to talk to her when she's alone to tell her she means something when she feels like she's worthless. You must be a really great guy if you can spark a hint of hope into a girl feeling that bad. Don't lose her. Great poem, i loved it.
--amanda-- |
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Re: I can see her dying
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by emystar on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 01:50:57 AM AEST
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Very sad but it's a masterpeice as there's so much of this in our day.
I agree, jus luv her. Hold her when she gets depressed.
keep writing.
luv, huggs, prayer,
emy |
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Re: I can see her dying
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by Devsouane on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 05:41:01 AM AEST
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| wow this was realy great emotional,strong and powerful poem and it was meaningful 2 i loved it !! keep it up writing good poems because this was great !! |
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