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Daddy's Little Girl In Daddy's Little world
Contributed by
SimplyMe
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Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 12:48:51 AM in AEST
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Throughout my life you've had so many expectations for me
And i've agreed even when i had the right to disagree
I've spent my entire life trying to please you
And somehow i've managed to pull through
Which is why i'm still trying to understand how and why i began to hate you
Perhaps it was the day you had too much to drink
Just give me a minute i need to think
Maybe it was the time you were willing to walk out on me
All because for once in my life i was actually happy
I remember it now i remember it all
The day you put your hands on me that was your down fall
Even after all we have been through
I found it in my heart to forgive you
It wasn't your fault you were in a terrible state of mind
Really i'm the one to blame because i'm far too kind
I remember when you said i'd always be "Daddy's little girl"
You said that i was Daddy's whole world
That's why i don't understand why you hurt me
You lied to your little girl Daddy how can this be?
You hurt your little girl and you were supposed to be my hero
What happened where did he go?
Daddy don't you see?
You bring out the scared little girl in me
I was your little girl years ago
But i'm older now and i know
I know what you did and i forgive you
Not because i want to
But because it's the only thing i can do
I have a brain and it's about time i put it to use
I know what you did and alcohol is no longer the excuse
You were the only father i had
My real father wasn't ready to be a dad
But you were and that was good
However somewhere along the way you misunderstood
I don't think you'll ever know the true meaning of fatherhood
I don't know how but i managed to forgive you
But even that don't stop the endless pain i go through
I still love you but as for being "Daddy's little girl"
That is only possible in your little world
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SimplyMe
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2005-02-26 00:48:51]
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Re: Daddy's Little Girl In Daddy's Little world
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by emystar on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 01:04:35 AM AEST
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Very sad but written well.
Hang tuff.
Luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Daddy's Little Girl In Daddy's Little world
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by seebs on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 01:12:40 AM AEST
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this poem is incredible! i would love to hear what has gone on and stuff. when i was reading your poem i got pulled into your emotions. I want you to remember that when you talk about what happened between you and your dad... you're not the only one that has to go through it, some people may have it worse
Keep me posted |
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Re: Daddy's Little Girl In Daddy's Little world
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by kidpoet_213 on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 01:23:52 AM AEST
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An excellent poem! I can only imagine what has gone on... I have a friend who's going through the same type of pain... She was abused for years... and now she is really hurting inside from all of it! I... too... was abused... not by a family member though... by a supposed family friend.
I guess... we all have our stories to tell... u told yours here very well. Things have got to get better... and they will... I held all my pain in for 20 + years... believe me it can eat u up inside if u don't let it out fully! Take care... if u ever need to talk... I'm just a PM or an IM away.
~Donna~ |
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Re: Daddy's Little Girl In Daddy's Little world
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by beamer on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 01:48:46 AM AEST
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| You did an excellent job with this. I have been there and I am sorry for you. Forgiveness is hard but I am glad that you have forgiven. It only destroys us if we don't. |
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Re: Daddy's Little Girl In Daddy's Little world
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by poetryforthesoul on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 03:21:12 PM AEST
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| you showed your emotions, i felt it, i cried. your a really good poet! but hang on strong becuase their is always a reason to live even in your darkness hour remember in the time when your fears take over it can be your greatest weapon of courage to move on. i hope everything is well for you and i'm happy that you can still forgive people and i hope you can trust people still too becuase not everyone is like your father!! so keep on writing hang in there and YOUR A GREAT POET!!!! |
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Re: Daddy's Little Girl In Daddy's Little world
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by poetrygirl1991 on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 03:54:18 PM AEST
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This was a very emotional poem as well as story and u did great presenting it to others lives, i cried to hear what you had to go through, knowing my childhood couldve been the same but i have had a very bad bond with my mother...she always emotionally abused me, and it bugged me to pieces but , i eventually was sick of it and confronted someone bout it , though thats all over,
My heart will never let go all the things she said and tolld me. She told me things like my father never wanted me, that i was ugly, and
that i looked like a slut...she told me i was aslob, but thats not at all the worst of it, i hope everything works out for you, ive tried getting along with my mom, its worked for now, but its hard looking into her eyes without being hurt inside. keep writing i loved your poem. ~~chrissy |
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Re: Daddy's Little Girl In Daddy's Little world
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by reprobate on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 07:40:15 PM AEST
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you need to stop carrying it as an open wound. what i believe happened here is unforgivable and should be dealt with in the harshest manner. i'm sorry but children need to be children and allowed to grow withoit such ugliness imposed upon them. i just commented on 'brownhun3y' 's post about the same thing. all i can say is why...
so sorry. be well!
thanks for sharing |
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Re: Daddy's Little Girl In Daddy's Little world
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by BrokenAngel on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 08:41:50 PM AEST
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This is so sad.. I am so sorry your dad hurt you. But you do not need to keep it in. That only hurts worse. I hope things get better for you. If you ever need someone to talk to you can always private message me. :)
-K |
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Re: Daddy's Little Girl In Daddy's Little world
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by catz77 on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 03:20:02 AM AEST
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wow this was a great write
your very good at expressing yourself and
being able to describe so perfectly
and im sorry for what happened,
i guess some people know how to be a man
but just dont get being a father
catz77 |
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Re: Daddy's Little Girl In Daddy's Little world
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by FleurdeSang on
Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 05:44:06 PM AEST
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Impeccable intensity!! I know how this is, my friend, as you have seen from some of my writes... This was truly... a somber and so sadly true... a masterpiece to be marvelled by all! I'm so sorry for this happening to you... I'm sorry that good people must endure horrible things..when they do not deserve it. But such is life..some get through..some don't... I'm happy you have, after all these years of penting up your emotions, have let it all out, and created a tear-jerking perfection. I have yet to forgive my father... sometimes I think I should.. but then again, does he truly deserve it? Something I still need to really think over.
Merci beaucoup, cheri ami... for your beautiful poem and your gorgeous comment. Whenever you need to talk to someone, you have a friend in me. Gut-wrenching, heart-felt, and powerful till the very end!! Again, flawless! I hope to see more poetry from you, Simplyme... I truly enjoy reading them. You'll most definitely be seeing more of me, lol. Superb write. Merci again. All my love and blessings. Forever,
Your newest friend and fan,
Stephy! *Fleur* |
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Re: Daddy's Little Girl In Daddy's Little world
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by sweetangeluk on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 01:26:50 PM AEST
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Now I am crying again just wiped away the tears from reading another one of your poems. I am so sorry that you had to endure this pain. Your loving heart forgives and this is so much better than letting it eat away your heart.
A magnificent write
((HUGS)))
Love Angelxxxx |
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