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your secret love
Contributed by
russ-dawg
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Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 12:37:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I see you there all the time
but I'm the last thing on your mind
I hope one day you'll look at me
see that we are ment to be
I want you, I need you
I can't live with out you
I don't know what to do
I see you there all the time
you don't know me but I love you.
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russ-dawg
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2005-02-26 00:37:55]
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Re: your secret love
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by Dusty on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 12:47:05 AM AEST
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That sucks!! I mean the poem is good, the sentiment bites the big one. I think being ignores,whether intentional or not is the worst feeling in the world. Good write tho.
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Re: your secret love
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by emystar on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 12:49:43 AM AEST
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Great wrting.
huggs, luv, smiles,
emy |
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Re: your secret love
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by seebs on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 01:07:47 AM AEST
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I write poems that really have no points to them too. I was really touched by this poem... maybe you should try to figure out why you wrote thiss, dig really deep into your soul.
Keep me posted!
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Re: your secret love
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by xXcrossedXx on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 01:35:22 AM AEST
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This was beautiful! I loved it! Great job. Excellent.
--amanda-- |
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