|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Victory City Burning
Contributed by
TheEarlyNovember
on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 12:23:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
|
Abandon buildings fall to their graves
Boarded up and broken down
The trees still speak of forever
A landscape lost while a city sleeps
Don't look away
Don't look away
This is what we've become
Don't look away
Don't look away
I'm afraid of whats come over us
Pale skis painting a disaster
No sun will shine on this empire
This is Victory City burning down
Listen, we've got a lot to learn
Copyright ©
TheEarlyNovember
... [
2005-02-26 00:23:10]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Victory City Burning
(User Rating: 1 )
by sicknivesevered on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 03:08:20 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Nice work, though I don't really get the message. I think that the middle stanzas have an enjoyable rhythm to them. Mraaw... |
|
|
Re: Victory City Burning
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 03:18:24 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
this is a neat little poem.. but im not surprised that not many people have commented. its almost a little too poetetic for its own good, but that alright because you dont nessesarily have to please anybody with art. i think, however, i understand the theme you are getting at, and that is that everything we think we know is pretty much meaningless. this poem is a warning.. and if im not mistaken, its against pride. i could definately be wrong, but thats what i see in it. anyway, great write, dont be discouraged by your lack of comments on this one.. its good.
joshua |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
