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Six feet deep in Misery
Contributed by
ForeverAlone
on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 12:03:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Faintly
Visible
In the shroud of this fog
Six feet deep
Laid to rest
"Forever" Asleep
Unintently
Miserable
To meet god
In the end
A casket as a bed
Nothing to mend
Barely
Restful
Treated as a dog
Buried ALIVE!
I'm not dead
But nobody hears my cry
Brutally
Cruel
Blinded in a smog
You put me to rest
When I was'nt dead
Deep in this darkness
Fragile
Guess my face was misread
Now I'm suppresed
Gonna die slowly
...
I dread
...
No food, no water, no light to see
I WAKE UP!
Good god it was only
A dream!
...
Then I look around
...
I'm still in the casket
...
I scream
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Re: Six feet deep in Misery
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by xXcrossedXx on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 12:19:36 AM AEST
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I liked this a lot, you have a very unique way of writing. I really enjoed this and often I feel burried alive as well, wonderful write.
--amanda-- |
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Re: Six feet deep in Misery
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by emystar on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 12:40:23 AM AEST
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Mercy that would be something to write about.
We must ell um make sure to put pen-n-paper in there with us. smile
Very well said.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Six feet deep in Misery
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by SimplyMe on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 12:57:19 AM AEST
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*Reads the poem in amazement* Wow.. where to start? This poem was absolutely beautiful... believe it or not i've dream about this exact thing just about every night... i haven't though for a while since my mom gave me a Bible t put under my pillow. It helps if your a beilever in God that is. Wow this poem really got to me. It is well written though. Guess i wasn't alone in that after all....Much love
~Alucia~ |
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Re: Six feet deep in Misery
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 05:25:20 AM AEST
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| amazing, wow |
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Re: Six feet deep in Misery
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 12:02:27 AM AEST
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| scream loud enough to be heard the first time, dont waste your oxygen. i agree with emy, might as well as be poetic while youre "dead" you of course already know i think this poem is good. i must add the title is also very good ::winks:: |
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