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Heart's melody...
Contributed by
mina-1
on
Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 11:42:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Close your eyes and make a wish
As the music plays it's song
I'll kiss your lips a thousand times
Melodies softly playing along
I'll have you wrapped in my arms
Where you tenderly belong
We'll make up our own musical melody
As we sway all night to the song
Ecstacy breathes out its fine musical tune
Causing all the desert sand to form into dunes
The desire to fulfill your dreams is all that I seek
Leaving my stringing melody for itself to speak
This perfect melody we string along to our hearts song
Causes crashing crescendos to play vibrant and long
It's song of love can only be sung to someone who is true
This musical tune that I have written can only be played for you.
Copyright ©
mina-1
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2005-02-25 23:42:04]
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Re: Heart's melody...
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by lil_angel on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 12:22:31 AM AEST
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| I liked this poem! In my own thoughts jumbled all together makes it harder to read...you might try breaking your poems up a little! But those are just my thoughts! |
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Re: Heart's melody...
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by kidpoet_213 on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 12:37:29 AM AEST
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I like it as well. I think it is written down just fine. Maybe it could be broken up a bit... but over all it's great just the way it is!
I wonder though... is it truly done...? It seems almost like a song to be sung. And for that it isn't finished... it needs more...
The Heart's Melody... goes on and on...
~Donna~ |
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Re: Heart's melody...
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by emystar on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 01:12:07 AM AEST
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Very beautifull but can I jus shut one eye and read with the other, smile.
It's beautifull.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Heart's melody...
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by pixie on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 10:02:07 AM AEST
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beautifully written, lovely words
pix xx |
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Re: Heart's melody...
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by jmpy84 on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 03:39:44 PM AEST
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| lovely words well done krrp it up |
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