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The Ghosts
Contributed by
Kuro_Mirai
on
Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 11:24:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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The ghosts, the ghosts
They follow me around
They stare at me all day
And hear my every sound
They whisper in my ear
Whats on the other side
They tell me in my sleep
Exactly how they died
A quiet little giggle
To the loudest shrillest scream
It's hard to listen every day
It's tearing me a my seams
These spirits claim to be here
To help me calm my nerves
But all they give me is nights full of fear
I don't want them here
Please, go away
I don't want you hear
Please, just stay away
Before I lose to fear
The ghosts, the ghosts
They follow me around
They stare at me all day
And hear my every sound
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Kuro_Mirai
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2005-02-25 23:24:36]
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Re: The Ghosts
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by lil_angel on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 12:20:05 AM AEST
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Very well done...if this is a leteral poem...just tell them to go home...that is suppose to work!
Very good imergy though, you caught the emotions very well! |
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Re: The Ghosts
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by tres_estrellas on
Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 12:13:54 AM AEST
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| I liked that poem. A good write. And I also understand ur situation to some extent, which makes me like it even more! |
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Re: The Ghosts
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by SylviaWalters on
Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 03:29:10 AM AEST
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| i really like this poem, great rhyming, understandable |
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Re: The Ghosts
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by remote on
Saturday, 17th September 2005 @ 03:12:54 PM AEST
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| Nice write. |
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