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I Wish
Contributed by
Stellar
on
Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 08:43:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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I wish for one day
To see a silver lining behind every cloud
To know the only way to go is up
When all you are is down
I wish for one hour
To be able to find peace
To find a time
When I feel the most at ease
I wish for one minute
I could focus on the blessings I have
And let go
Of all the heartache from my past
I wish for a moment
That I'd stop feeling blue
One moment of happiness
To help me get through
Copyright ©
Stellar
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2005-02-25 20:43:21]
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Re: I Wish
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by miss_leadin_lady on
Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 08:47:44 PM AEST
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| Jus wanted you to know i enjoyed your poem. Keep up the good work! |
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Re: I Wish
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 09:37:52 PM AEST
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A stunningly beautiful write. Heart-wrenchingly sad even. I hope you get what you wish for, I'll wish for you too...
Take Care
- Becca |
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Re: I Wish
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by xXcrossedXx on
Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 11:09:57 PM AEST
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This was a beautiful piece. I especially liked your first stanza, it really got me excited to see what you could come up with for the rest of the poem. Great Write, good luck.
--amanda-- |
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Re: I Wish
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by Mangs on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 05:03:50 AM AEST
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| dont we all...very nicely expressed... |
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Re: I Wish
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by pixie on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 10:04:41 AM AEST
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a migle of sadness and beauty in this write, a great piece of writing
pix xx |
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