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Falling
Contributed by
LadyWynter
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Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 07:12:14 PM in AEST
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Forever I was falling
Into darkness
Ever deeper
Clinging, desperate
To my dreams, as
One by one they slipped away
Falling farther into nothing
Hope long faded
Lost and lonely
Silent, crying
Crimson tears flowed
Down my cheeks, a dying rain
Then all at once you found me
In my darkness
You called to me
Reached your hand out
Brushed the tears off
With your love erased my pain
Now once again I'm falling
So completely
Out of darkness
Into your arms
Ever open
Where it's safe to dream again
Copyright ©
LadyWynter
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2005-02-25 19:12:14]
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Re: Falling
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by Dusty on
Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 07:18:43 PM AEST
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What a wonderful feeling! I loved the way you reached the sentiment.
~Dusty~ |
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Re: Falling
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by Jezabel on
Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 07:19:17 PM AEST
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| lucky are you, luv. hope you never return to dark. no hope for me tho. good luv |
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Re: Falling
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by Nazmythian on
Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 08:51:12 PM AEST
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That last line ... yeah ... I like that. I like the whole feel and layout. I know how this feels too so it reaches me on a personal level too.
Nazzy ~
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Re: Falling
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by DorianChambers on
Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 09:11:16 PM AEST
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an exquizit peice of romanc e2 grace these pages lovely write . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Falling
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by Stellar on
Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 10:11:53 PM AEST
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I love this! Each stanza flowed right into the next. It was very beautifully written.
Take care ~Stellar |
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Re: Falling
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by Spazzo on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 02:36:13 AM AEST
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Wow this is so beautiful!
Scott |
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Re: Falling
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by pixie on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 10:05:37 AM AEST
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very well written poem, keep up the good work
pix xx |
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Re: Falling
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by Deleterious_Dislike on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 07:34:28 AM AEST
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That gave me an unexpected chill.
It's a cliche but..it's simplicity was beautiful.
4 out of 5 *s |
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Re: Falling
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by Twisterchaser on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 11:00:25 PM AEST
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| I'm glad you have been lifted , and can trust again. |
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Re: Falling
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by Silent-No-More on
Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 02:45:28 AM AEST
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Gosh, this gets me. I'm with Jarred and Nazzy --- that last line is potent. On a purely personal level... it just tears me up.
Beautifully expressed! There is a lovely transition in this piece... you've obviously found what so many seek.
Still... trying to find a way to dream again,
~Snemmy~ |
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Re: Falling
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by lostinmyself on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 01:15:12 PM AEST
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Wow!
This is wonderful, there is so much emotion in this and you make the words almost run together, as if they are meant to be together. The flow is just perfect.
Gorgeous poem my friend,
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: Falling
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 22nd May 2014 @ 02:02:20 PM AEST
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beautifully written with great style and flow,
hugs n' love nessa |
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