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Wouldn't it be nice
Contributed by
Mangs
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Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 04:31:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Wouldn’t it be nice… to have someone think the world of you.
Watch you breathe as you softly sleep.
Lift you up, with a love so deep.
Run her fingers through your hair,
And whisper in your ear,
When she knows you’re not aware.
Hang on to every word you say
Gaze into those eyes of yours,
and never for a moment look away.
Dance with you, to slow music so sweet
When she knows
You’ve got ten left toes on two left feet.
Cuddle up in your arms
As you sip coffee on a rainy day.
Read you a book and make all your worries wither away.
Hold your hand so tight
When you’re walking in a park or crossing a busy street.
Kiss you sumptuously and make your life complete.
Go camping with you
Because you don’t know how to cook.
And then hug you around the fire, pretending she’s seen a spook.
Tell you that she loves you
And mean every word she’ll ever say.
Wouldn’t it be nice…to have someone love you that way.
Copyright ©
Mangs
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2005-02-25 16:31:32]
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Re: Wouldn't it be nice
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by shelliewilliams on
Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 04:40:59 PM AEST
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| This is so beautiful!! |
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Re: Wouldn't it be nice
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by lostinmyself on
Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 05:26:24 PM AEST
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Awww..this is so sweet...
Bless.
I think we'd all like something similar to this, don't worry though, one day you'll find her, you'll see.
Great write,
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: Wouldn't it be nice
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by Maylaur on
Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 05:51:02 PM AEST
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I often dream of a man who would feel that way about me.
Lovely poem :) |
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Re: Wouldn't it be nice
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by little_genna on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 04:20:32 AM AEST
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Hunny this is sooo beautiful,
your words touched my soul.
we all wish this in some form or another,
i think you will find her when you least expect it.
Enjoy your life hunny and she should walk into your life .....
......if she hasnt already and you just havent realised....
love always
you princess
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Re: Wouldn't it be nice
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 10:31:35 AM AEST
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| sweet sentiment. we could all use love like this. |
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Re: Wouldn't it be nice
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 12:04:18 PM AEST
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Just wouldn't it . . .
I like this one, |
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Re: Wouldn't it be nice
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by xXcrossedXx on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 10:37:14 AM AEST
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Aww! That would be nice! extremely nice write. I can't speak for about a half hour after I read your poetry your thoughts are amazing, beautiful write. Keep it up!
--amanda-- |
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