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endless tears
Contributed by
karmen
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Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 01:15:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The worst heart break,
from you, my first love.
This I just can't take.
You were the one I couldn't life with out.
I thought we were meant to be,
with no doubt.
For so long you didn't speak,
it hurt so much,
there went another week.
I'd give anything to still be with you,
because in my heart,
we were true.
But now we're apart,
and here I am, with endless tears,
and no heart.
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karmen
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2005-02-25 13:15:52]
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Re: endless tears
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by pixie on
Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 01:19:01 PM AEST
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*hands you tissues* I know how hard this muct have been to write for you, I lost my first love a few years ago and never thought I woudl survive it, but I have as will you, you might not think it now, it will be hard but your heart will need time to heal *hugs*
pix xx
a very sad and very emotional poem, raw emotions |
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Re: endless tears
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by disturbed_silence on
Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 10:22:13 PM AEST
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| when am sad i always turn to this site and write some poetry. this has become my healing center and comments help even more so,here i am telling you that everything happens for a reason even if you don't know what that reason is. |
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