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If I had hopes today
Contributed by
jillian_phan
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Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 11:52:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
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If I had hopes today
Could I make it through tomorrow
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People see what they expect
If only they knew that expecting
Is not the thing to do.
Copyright ©
jillian_phan
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2005-02-25 11:52:20] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: If I had hopes today
(User Rating: 1 ) by Necromant on
Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 01:55:06 PM AEST (User
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Ohhh! Short but to the point! Yes the last stanza is so true! I really liked it :)!
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Re: If I had hopes today
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 10:38:16 PM AEST (User
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its kind of hard to overcome humaness, but im sure some of can do it. very nicely done. |
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Re: If I had hopes today
(User Rating: 1 ) by DorianChambers on
Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 11:34:12 PM AEST (User
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oh u r good, i mean very good, and such wisdom in a write of this sort . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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