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Mirror, Mirror
Contributed by
concrete_rose
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Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 11:03:53 AM in AEST
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Mirror, mirror on the wall reflecting this face of mine, I'm lost without any tracks to follow, i''m way too far behind.
I''ve been searching for a while now, but have no place else to hide, i''ve been running trying to rush love to fill that empty space inside.
Mirror, mirror on the wall i look at you, but don''t feel confident, it''s hard just trying to be myself, in a world that is male dominant.
Mirror, mirror on the wall, tell me what you see, is Beauty written on my face? look inside of me.
It''s hard for me to find someone, to love me just for me, most guys judge by apperance, and what their eyes would like to see.
Mirror, mirror on the wall my self-esteem is low, wish i could be a model, although their pain they do not show.
Mirror, mirror on the wall, take my scars, and clear my skin, give me legs to die for, outer beauty and within.
Mirror, mirror on the wall, help me get my self together, outer beauty is only temporary, inner beauty lasts forever.
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Re: Mirror, Mirror
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by One on
Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 01:16:27 PM AEST
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Embarrassing
Uninspiring
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Re: Mirror, Mirror
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by Wachumiri on
Thursday, 23rd March 2006 @ 02:21:56 PM AEST
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I good first post. It speaks waves of pain, not as graceful as your later ones I've read, but still very... honest. I think you write a lot with your heart, maybe that's why your poetry flows so well.
Take care.
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