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Desert-Rain
Contributed by
Tanmaya
on
Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 08:39:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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The listening voices grow quieter,
trying to talk, learning to listen.
Calling out for someone-
forgotten names, once
signed on blank papers
for leased-out hopes.
The spaces between
yesterdays and tomorrows
now grow smaller, and
their shadows grow taller.
But, somewhere upon
that desert of weary voices,
the clouds will break open.
And rains shall fall softly
without a sound.
Copyright ©
Tanmaya
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2005-02-25 08:39:38]
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Re: Desert-Rain
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by faith_my_eyes on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 08:36:19 PM AEST
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hauning and intruiging, with a tinge of hope at the end. I love this line:
Calling out for someone-
forgotten names, once
signed on blank papers
for leased-out hopes.
well done.
Em
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Re: Desert-Rain
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 06:16:45 PM AEST
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You such wonderful insight within this write.
Very imaginative and well crafted! |
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Re: Desert-Rain
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by Fionndruinne on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 09:27:52 PM AEST
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This imagery is a lovely and vivid way to portray a piece of life. Short, but most certainly not small.
Andrew |
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Re: Desert-Rain
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by Wachumiri on
Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 11:57:43 PM AEST
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Well written. Conjured up some really good pictures in my head. Thank you.
Take care.
David |
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