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It!
Contributed by
Wesley_Dale_Willis
on
Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 07:28:44 AM in AEST
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It was a life,
It was holy,
Gods creation,
It has a soul,
His and her blood,
Flowed through its veins,
His, her, being
Mother, Father,
Its heart did beat,
It had feelings,
Now it is dead,
Hands of murders,
The infant cries,
Just for one, yes
One gasp of air,
It deserves more,
Than to be called,
Just the word it!
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2005-02-25 07:28:44]
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Re: It!
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by Scarlett on
Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 09:39:25 AM AEST
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this touched me and i can't believe that it doesn't have more comments.
tell me if i am getting this completely wrong but it seems to me to be about abortion (or maybe i - being extremely anti abortion - am just interpreting it that way).
either way, powerful poem that touched me deeply. |
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Re: It!
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 08:22:57 AM AEST
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I comprenda in a big way.
Awesome work.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: It!
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by mindset on
Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 02:33:22 PM AEST
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| my kind of flow in this ample creative wording I would like you to write something deeper within that you have gone before I think it will begin..... |
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