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happy
Contributed by
aprilrose
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Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 06:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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for you i love for you i give my all my everything..
for you i would climb the highest mountain.
swim the biggest sea!!
for you i will laydown my life!!!
you are my everything i will hold you and love you throughout eternity
you have my heart and my soul you have every breath in me.
yet still i cant put in to words how happy you make me..
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aprilrose
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2005-02-25 06:40:00]
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Re: happy
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by Wesley_Dale_Willis on
Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 07:36:42 AM AEST
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| Practice, practice, practice, keep writing those words girl some day you will catch those words to put on paper. Metaphores will do wonders.bye from Wes... |
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Re: happy
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by DorianChambers on
Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 11:20:41 AM AEST
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beautiful poem i enjoyed reading it . . .
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Re: happy
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by Caged Soul on
Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 04:42:21 AM AEST
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Maybe not the best poem with regards to formal structure, but what it lacks there, it makes up with meaning. The feeling of being hopelessly inlove like you described in the poem is one not many can say they have really felt. Maybe it was your intention to write the poem the way you did to represent visually the way you felt at that time, but thats just a guess.
All in all, i enjoyed reading this piece.
See you around
Ash~ |
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