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could this be
Contributed by
aprilrose
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Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 05:44:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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could this be am i in a dream is this you by my side tears of joy start to slide..
the days have been so long so scary so sad without you to hold.
could this be real or is this an image i see in front of me
did you come back from heaven just to rescue me from the darkness you forseen?
did you see i couldnt survive with you here by my side?
did you see my tears that i cried?
the depression i faced when you were not by my side?
why dont you answer me?
is this just a dream as i lay here in peace take me with you as i fall into a deep sleep...
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2005-02-25 05:44:36]
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Re: could this be
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by poetrygirl1991 on
Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 05:51:43 AM AEST
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| Very emotional touchy story... i can relate to it...but the person i loved didnt die, i simply moved and havent seen him since, and since i moved so far away, i know ill never see him again its tough. once again, great poem keep writing, chrissy |
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Re: could this be
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by DorianChambers on
Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 11:26:35 AM AEST
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tell u this hit home excellant writting kell,
Dorian Chambers |
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