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Tears
Contributed by
ans
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Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 03:11:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I shed my tears
Longing for the past
And the deception
That I can't get past
To love her,
Is something I shouldn't do
For she is the one
Who created these tears
My life now empty
Trust no one
All alone...
As I sit...
And let the pain consume me
As I fall into a hole
Of darkness and fear...
Copyright ©
ans
... [
2005-02-25 03:11:53]
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Re: Tears
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by Dusty on
Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 03:17:40 AM AEST
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Maybe it's my insomnia, but this short, sad poem touched me deeply, it made me want to cry, I am so sorry you feel this way, it will get better!
~Dusty~ |
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Re: Tears
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by aprilrose on
Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 06:21:48 AM AEST
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| wow deep emotion it tells that it dosnt have to be a long poem to be deep and feeling you are a great wrighter |
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Re: Tears
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by mylady on
Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 07:39:12 AM AEST
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| It very nice poem and short to read beside short poem are very emotional that i can understand what he go threw . |
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