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Truthful
Contributed by
Dusty
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Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 03:08:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
insomniac
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Sometimes I do things that just seem weird,
I say things and act in ways to be feared,
I just don't talk the way I should,
I just won't be quiet even though I could,
I will not look down, will not be afraid,
Will not be deterred in any way,
I always say what's on my mind,
Even if my reasons seem hard to find,
I refuse to play coy or hide behind lies,
Even though I'm told that is sometimes unwise,
But, life is too short to be playing that game,
So, what I feel and what I say are always the same,
Don't look for motives behind my words,
Even my reactions, though sometimes absurd,
Are straight from the heart and so very real,
I remain truthful to myself and to you about how I feel.
Copyright ©
Dusty
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2005-02-25 03:08:03]
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Re: Truthful
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by aprilrose on
Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 06:23:22 AM AEST
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| i think ppl should always be themselves no matter what you write great and i loved this poem |
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Re: Truthful
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by Tanmaya on
Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 08:32:52 AM AEST
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A message well-expressed.
I liked the fact that the rhyming flows, and doesn't feel forced at all.
Good work! |
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Re: Truthful
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by Necromant on
Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 12:30:31 PM AEST
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Wow, that is how I want to be though I must say I act totally the opposite. I'm what poeple consider as weak and act to please people. I admire you. Very well expressed poem!!
Anne :)
P.s. Thanks for your nice comment |
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Re: Truthful
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by m_p_w777 on
Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 01:33:07 AM AEST
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| i really liked this i'm the same way and people have atendency to get really ***** at me because i refuse to lie just so they can feel better about themselves |
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